【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) E* W" q: O! qFrom the first moment we met,
* ?) u% X3 J0 I* _1 t( {3 II already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: k7 C& q0 Z2 AIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  K- J; Z4 x& \, n0 [' g( OI would probably know how you feel
  b0 U* {7 Y0 Q; n: S$ ~& ELove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 s* m) Z8 \; e7 ^9 KI want to confess that I love you,
  o; W. f/ a+ x8 j/ `0 h* S( EBut I never did
- \  E5 K3 Y3 F5 `8 j3 @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ a) L2 ?; w/ z( V! LIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: E& L0 P7 {" u9 w  OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: e) E+ k- H/ J' _3 SCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 |0 P2 x% q9 cLove… just the word love
* V% F- q  z& N  x8 j0 lWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ b* S9 t" b! v! q5 Y* C. SI want to confess that I love you,
( Y+ F4 d. g6 x4 G! Q$ x* lBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! U, ~8 G; b: Y4 HIf today isn’t too late,
% S# N4 D; u1 cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& v$ [4 n3 J/ o# E; G- DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, Z" W+ ?# j& L$ L& ?# t! h- KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 s7 I+ s# D0 h+ rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- F" K8 j2 E/ F- a5 g+ d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  Z* r9 s: k4 u' i1 Y7 t<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 e" n/ b& P) M8 m  |<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 g5 b& a5 _4 b  S  K, F<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 C7 r: D9 e8 _/ E<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 E. |( k, h' d2 ^# P5 g<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, {" x, w) B1 i3 x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; \- ]- Y# T. _+ C  L<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 p+ p/ a' @2 ~3 W" N& E<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ J6 ?3 J# Z6 t- l% n0 u/ ^<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 q  A1 C& h( u' Y& K<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# n1 K7 g' B3 V2 ]1 f<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# n7 Q9 f7 W2 k. `& V<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& F0 c; |# K: X7 e- f0 D: _6 {2 q/ ~<P>但我不会</P>
, y' `$ ?9 y8 m. a<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. ]- J9 }  b& \* H7 ^% B$ ?% ~<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 [1 J; g; `/ b" `) m+ t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- L% t1 E" V7 L& O+ E" g/ k2 i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 E# v* K, J4 W7 E, o/ U  w8 A+ L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ k2 T% J5 _) Y8 I<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 H" Q% Z  [6 f  A& `. g<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ d+ b* S1 z& T" S6 T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* n5 |+ n% B- H2 ?. d" j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; s, {& ]! h) l# i$ W- `6 E<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. L4 T( T# [0 F  m9 b! Y+ v  L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  S6 V0 i" A; f  l. \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' @1 _& W% G" _$ I% z4 c/ L2 {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 o# f; v+ D& h* J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 E1 G: x: L0 f2 M2 Z; \& ~. @( d# @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, I- r8 d; W! S2 R, y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

. I9 f( i" b4 e这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 g7 u3 L# C; d( S  M这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>