【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 b/ M* [* n0 K7 V: A3 @我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
" c0 G9 M( e# V& l" Z) V- w) {6 sI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 }/ d" i4 G& |- n: Q1 FI would probably know how you feel
# r) j5 @! z# E( {Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: _, H- q; [! [3 `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& k7 I% V6 h3 C4 Q  ~1 A/ nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% }  B. @7 |' B5 ~Can I entrust it to you?
( C+ K; w) ~% o0 X5 B+ iEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 }, ?* s4 C/ T+ s/ OBut I never did
! D! w4 V6 r5 @, j0 qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 C4 d8 O5 D5 T1 mIf today isn’t too late,
3 v6 d) E. I2 a2 A* _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) `9 F2 |  `7 I6 w) hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

4 A8 L/ J: K$ O; K& `; j[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 T3 c) d0 v( ~1 _( J+ e<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  e2 X' w* M" U6 Z# [<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 ^& ^/ R! ~6 Z/ w9 a<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ |) a% U& Q. {* }* D<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 i, i) @+ h4 X: t<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" K1 n5 E" w" G) c5 Y: t* Q1 ~<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( A) Y6 [& V" U0 @0 E) x0 [<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) v; S; b1 J( \& g! G* Q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 U; ~; l' ]# ]' ?' ?5 X4 E* t3 U9 F. ^<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; W! S+ I: K. t$ u& n6 Y3 t. @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 U& A, u! F" l1 ~1 l<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) r8 W2 t7 C/ x9 q: ^; O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! z3 X; N8 `' w/ e4 D& ]$ @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# I' T1 X8 c) n* P* n2 M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ V2 \1 r) o# H+ K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. K; r" T4 `8 x6 x: H, q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) ~2 K+ @7 s, g6 V6 |! C) l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 _5 E& ~9 [8 Z6 f( k1 U3 V<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' s6 l" t1 y1 r3 c& S6 A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" u) T- f( l! K4 z, G, B  @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; u: J8 I; d; H7 N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ g1 S) h  v6 I  P, ]% P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ B3 j" k' ~# O! v: M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 Q' u( G  F; i+ m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

  v1 P7 P4 ^9 c0 S/ i; _这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 h& G, T- ?' p4 j! U9 j  l& k<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 [" ?3 E: x  t- r) Z9 F# x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>