【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
; z0 c3 x) @% Z% f  x" MThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ T. |3 V0 s5 d$ @That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 H* d7 ?' U: d  {I would probably know how you feel
: @$ a* X; P8 M( N  n$ p3 ~8 NLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: ~8 \9 l9 y* z3 v$ g4 D7 x9 hBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) M- I+ `- j5 r8 o- q  G! I. kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; _' m/ z! n8 _6 kCan I entrust it to you?
2 K* |' Q8 _" ^( X! `# z  O  O8 lEntrust my love within your heart
5 y# a. }; ]7 w5 [Love… just the word love
6 t6 A( o: m! ]  e7 C+ NWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 g0 z& W. Q) g% P- h5 Y) y; wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ C* r7 u& I) J% m) K9 X( s- |Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
7 V" ]: t* I) D0 eEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

& |* B5 i& ?$ U9 H; n9 Q* l<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 R, C2 b: u2 N2 [+ D  r<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  D' x/ h& N4 Q" J& |9 T7 h* E<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% Z: C7 X+ i: R, Q<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 {( ^' a3 b0 r+ [  X+ e! O5 D3 v9 y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 ~: f2 l4 e. k" M<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- d, P8 z! F# ]9 l7 Q& p<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- j/ `7 c1 ]6 l! C1 p<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' B) L( v( y1 S0 ?<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 Y/ K1 M9 C! e, Y+ F<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, [( ^0 M4 N4 x1 x/ F<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ ]* d  W2 \. C4 V( L<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 }: c8 S% X! S- A% B1 i3 }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ P/ G) K# f5 Z. J2 O3 O: N* V  A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% \# }# u7 U2 S2 c* f; E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 M* T. X4 @$ k$ S& b. \( D. f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& l. y6 e; t8 W; V<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 v; x' R: s$ F( B6 q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ i6 {5 [2 ]3 A  l& A* w<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ N% F  ?3 p# z! Y6 V, g<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 i6 v+ P) \1 A5 d% F<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! d# E" G. ~$ S# e! d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" _' w# R4 r( M  B% @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% y: b6 w. o) j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- H' q& _# K9 p7 u" _$ q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# ]$ t3 J- {) u$ P 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 d4 O- o5 P. H, ^5 y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>