【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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% ^. g8 ^! z" u. o我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 z% ]4 M3 C9 j- t' C9 QThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& U$ y' ]2 Z# u0 N" XFrom the first moment we met,
9 ]4 ?; t# u- S8 @% N! @( EI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
9 |! i* \5 c6 w+ OBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 ?" h6 w9 i# y+ B, N  T; ^I would probably know how you feel
6 i- {$ _* |% k. S4 {+ T- |8 m) mLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. g( M. {8 G0 r$ k& SI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 o6 Z. v1 Z! }If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" x2 F  k2 |: Q8 e  Q( DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 t$ S; ~  m( ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
) T; H3 c0 F, O3 ?4 XWhy is it so difficult to express?
- s4 k, k1 N; D$ c7 @6 ~8 x$ iI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: H* _" f0 d* H0 WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 C2 d/ ^/ g( A7 p- ?2 I6 rIf today isn’t too late,
6 F* H: s9 m( @! b* nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& v7 f" ~7 y, L$ x) @8 RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( l/ D! r1 n: M. S/ G& xCan I entrust it to you?
) L" U  P# A7 s9 B1 C( LEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  ^9 y0 _& I  s3 J3 [# E7 u: v/ V( r<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 Z4 ]$ K4 v; L+ ^<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 ?+ C, M+ @8 _4 j) |( H<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 J; z2 B$ B; R5 j<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: ?( J, j4 j3 M! G% H5 I<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( Y+ ^! d; R; `  X7 z, i) N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 C8 R( y4 H4 z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 ]( z. f4 F+ E! N. t/ K- ~; {$ s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. w. o2 x- s; e5 O- z; \' D9 G<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 M$ R! T9 r$ h) T& m<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( D" S$ P+ a/ I+ O3 P% P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 e% {! ?! E  Z" ]+ N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, V1 j- O3 k+ [) }( _/ a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) E) `$ z3 H( [8 e5 {0 m( a7 C7 a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 I* \) ]+ H$ C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ N1 O& M' \/ P0 Q6 d7 `2 u* o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 Y& e4 A' |6 ?0 m: Q" p3 `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- y6 E; _+ X4 z) p+ n# j9 h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) q' W3 F  J( s, n- W<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; K' g7 ^! y) h# ~1 s4 G( C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! I  z1 ]; A2 I) L8 b* U: t6 q" C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. V' l  }$ p5 s' |<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
& ^4 m6 ~1 u: |( J/ T<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" f4 D6 o6 P# t: V7 m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% a, e, g3 {, q, B+ _<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* D! B" T7 R; p: P! q  E; D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ R& k7 ?) K. W# p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  ]; q5 p" T5 ?& S- [2 a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( V0 U9 R2 [9 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

$ V. Y# Y9 M: `" @& Q" `这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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) [, D( v* N) a/ q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>