【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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! R6 U! N6 U  @  V* A! M* z. G7 ?我另将歌词附在此。
( Z0 ]3 |9 S/ A: lThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ ?2 \7 I: F* ?% j* M6 Y$ nI already loved you with all my heart
# p0 G+ d: ?+ S' P9 P$ c, zWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' w# |" s( n" x& XIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% Z8 P/ @' x* K  p( e2 Y0 V  YI would probably know how you feel
/ c: W) z2 G( @. R6 k( D& QLove… just the word love
! S7 j  S, x+ W1 D: {& j: g% q6 uWhy is it so difficult to express?
# }* Q9 {9 m$ S( U: r' d7 Y- aI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- A0 ?* W6 ^+ I% o4 }$ oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) y* ]9 i! G1 h6 ?2 ~+ ?Can I entrust it to you?
& U) Q5 G3 k) d, N  DEntrust my love within your heart
  I9 ~& ?5 x. NLove… just the word love
0 Y" q3 t- P5 C- Y+ J/ MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( _; I9 I0 u% N  R4 ~* zBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, V2 W0 p8 Z6 ^/ H; a( A0 }If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 Z9 A5 a% F1 n) v* I1 WCan I entrust it to you?
1 y$ Z# o! }7 b% y) @! v6 @1 r: [Entrust my love within your heart
# R8 N# O% n/ A! c# k9 sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  C( V* V: i+ R  v& B( K7 |<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& _/ T' q, D0 d) x% _<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 F$ `; s7 m! F8 W. ?+ S9 Q/ }; E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 @5 v8 z) H1 [' q& D" A" A# T<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! a; [3 m1 k8 _; D6 E! a<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 ]" ^: y2 m/ X9 W<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% Q0 F8 a0 G# c& o5 `" Y8 J<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. ^" m, \. @3 H" S5 L<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- b+ x" x7 K, ]<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ U# \1 Q$ P. ~3 ]. ^  q. v  c8 |: B<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  a. P$ [( U- g/ b<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ S% t! F& i. |8 ^4 o+ t4 t5 w<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" d( J0 j- U4 F, D<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) o9 n& k' C& x% B6 H6 @3 T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* d  B3 J% z6 K+ q. `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 {3 g- a4 J9 J9 \6 E$ ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* t5 k" i7 c1 N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) h+ T! a3 Z$ _<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ m1 ]) v* e. f! g# z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 A. v/ w7 Y2 g; ^- H, r3 W<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
8 Y' l8 r) b6 f4 M4 @  M<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 o! h6 e, ?) M- G! `<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- {: U) w/ l6 m( S+ D( B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! ?' r$ _$ T) t9 G+ y2 e<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 I/ h7 B6 m4 w  I  O! Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- F0 _4 @  n6 \* \" b, M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! C8 P* {1 ?; l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  Q$ N% m8 }- ^. I+ f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. l, P- j7 Z1 z: S/ d1 s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 o! }% [- R+ ?# v! a- i  d& l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 ]: w# v5 Y4 x5 s" R3 p<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 h2 r( b* p$ |6 d" j$ ^ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 G3 b9 b/ f  m9 `& C" [这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 T3 L5 F+ N0 ?0 N8 w<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  d" f- [9 x. s* V6 U% G<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>