【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" V+ s1 I0 L4 g( v( I4 V4 q4 CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: C0 x2 O/ k3 ~; U! ~But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) x3 x: T* k9 E4 p' jI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% j: ~4 ]/ _- C) @9 q7 UWhy is it so difficult to express?
  d8 j9 o' N6 zI want to confess that I love you,
7 ]5 ^, B, _6 b' Z! [But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, H2 C5 W/ ~1 A5 c- Z2 X: N  VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) S8 S6 p+ \/ P  q9 }7 `* HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! r4 t$ N; N6 Z0 MIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 E% g1 f( J! u  sCan I entrust it to you?
2 v1 t3 Z9 ^9 J9 CEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

$ C: L/ _6 U. |1 O. g[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

: o7 V& _% ?3 M. N<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% U) `0 C1 g" P. j+ v4 g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' n3 U" b5 e5 P1 q0 P1 ^/ z) _2 q3 Z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) E/ r  ^6 ^. k1 s2 G<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- o1 T: Q$ _. p1 Y: E5 Q4 d<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 D3 y' Q9 e( w2 P<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! R$ w; V5 q9 c3 a<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  w& U: d+ _9 K* e<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 T9 g+ |" R% k/ |, A( O<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: x. s. u: ?2 ]<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# r$ x& n  t# p( ?+ z8 [" K+ m7 t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 Z" ]" r: A* x, C0 ]<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" e% [6 H. E! v2 [# `/ g/ X+ }<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ h: H7 s( v" e; V% \  K7 {/ V. P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) ?3 ^; }7 q5 Q9 O9 v" g) j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 m7 D# a) P3 R+ i% G" o" {1 r1 a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( y! n. D% f' @: s/ W  Y# ^. @<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 p# U+ ~, q( L5 W# R0 d7 H1 x<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
' C7 E& B2 m/ I<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 @) S' p! c$ P2 n! r  i/ v# [<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# q" N: L# S3 z& R8 X/ r5 ^; J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" v9 j1 z! E$ Q, u8 a" L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( Q  T; y9 j. h- d# u5 m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: O: t, b7 o7 J/ K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 ]0 b3 i7 s6 }$ y6 K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 @8 H% a. r" h( ]+ c& u2 ?! O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  H: F( l  T! y5 w( h) Q" c9 S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) C" S( \* i# s- Q, A8 m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) p( E' ^3 e; n8 T<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
5 t6 @/ X% x9 Z3 y8 Y7 s* ^% I<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

" ?( f0 p" C; ~+ c2 F5 o" F这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 a+ n$ ?' X- s8 j; r+ f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 H. K) i" h# L! C$ m<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>