【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


/ Y) H9 Z( U% x* x' o* I0 ~<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODYzNzI=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
$ F( [& ^; u4 v) K7 ]/ ^

我另将歌词附在此。
, b8 q9 ]3 A5 YThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: D& B  s- [* y# gBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 g3 E& G) j0 b* k7 pI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
  Q/ f) b$ _( f; w" k" A1 l8 BWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 N2 j5 H2 E  ]8 U! l$ yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 m7 A) W8 U+ z4 a. ]1 uIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 ?/ R6 B1 I' N; v. ACan I entrust it to you?
  A+ p) |- {) b- A  fEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! z8 H0 s9 K5 n) b/ z4 D, nI want to confess that I love you,
7 H' ~" X# Y" OBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
$ l; k& b! g% e8 TEntrust my love within your heart

+ E- |* u$ ]0 o[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

6 B. B/ \1 G- I
0 q8 @/ ^9 a) ^0 J  B<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 f2 K, L. A; O2 y* z# B$ I" E<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 w. l0 P0 d. u; \<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- x- g$ X5 _3 u- {<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" k* h  {. O1 L3 x- K. a<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ c* I) e+ @! e+ e<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 e  f$ d, N1 E3 P7 x& u& ~<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 ~; z1 Q- g* N1 x<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' a4 r9 v8 H% i! ?1 ]<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ N/ j8 `2 z5 K1 {1 _<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
9 _9 J% h$ o  o/ X+ G$ L" j2 W, @<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' i6 @5 {7 ]5 m. J1 C$ ]<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 D( T- ~8 L8 B: E4 `# C: |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 ]% O8 O# c: H: o8 M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( w1 c* l4 R: @8 f$ m, ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 A, B5 F9 @9 Q+ J: {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 T7 I0 {8 L6 ?2 e/ w: a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% `( _: c3 y, |' p5 O<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# y5 o9 ^$ Y8 b) v% c6 @<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 p! ~  T% J  I$ [- s7 {1 P$ n% B<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 `8 a. k5 M' ]  x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; h# r! J' Z9 E5 A% z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 Y. c1 H0 ~4 }+ C! j4 r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ f- B: X$ V  H; t' `/ _5 R, j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" [/ C% s  d! [: s7 E) Z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% G* e" y; t2 u6 i
我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
" G4 X$ o* ^; u8 r
/ ^% A& R. L6 T& V5 Z' v这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 [% n. I) N: p" ^! j* K% m2 p这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

<P>

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
" K7 f8 U5 G& @1 V, z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>