【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) R5 {: x- u5 |$ B' r& ~That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
! v4 Z6 G+ E9 c) eWe meet and talk everyday,
5 q" }; y( c; LBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 S# l% n' g7 zIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ ]- {0 l- t; r2 P2 Z& P) [; V6 rI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 `' R  g/ ~9 U2 ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 I; H! Z" q6 E* ^% \Entrust my love within your heart
# w( i9 V) A6 RLove… just the word love
4 l( u' I. t" f- fWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. l( s2 s+ B) T' I! t3 y' ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 \4 J$ ?, O0 h4 [0 r  EIf today isn’t too late,
/ d4 n5 {3 ~0 h, H8 @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 j; Z1 E; {) W: dEntrust my love within your heart
$ H) i1 I: T9 y0 w9 c6 dCan I entrust it to you?
6 P' o8 C, V7 _# b+ P5 WEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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- L5 |% \) n. g. O/ p<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! p0 O" p2 M& ]9 t% c+ T6 ~, L<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- V/ f' [( Y* @' t) Z6 Y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% V" T7 w0 p$ t7 [" M' }# Q# A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 P0 M# C& u; m/ @1 ?<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& e: H0 B* a$ z/ [( G8 h<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 ?( t9 l) I, a( V. M' M<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- W7 s) a* c; S# f; _<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 I' z$ N- E" |$ ^/ J! g$ t<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- B9 ~! k* i$ D5 d3 s) V5 V- v<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ U+ f- O% R- C5 w& Z6 I" T% _# b<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 s6 ~* }" P' a7 r2 {4 F# K* O<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& {+ I0 O, h  ^; b* Y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 d- X4 A5 O. e) [" b: u9 K7 o<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. |& Z" N4 X) n4 H1 ~" d! o9 N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& m1 [5 `% e# K" `( `: N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ u! T! a  |2 }+ M, n/ {7 B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# f8 K1 i  E3 X6 w- m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 |: ]/ r: g& V9 t0 f<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: F1 J9 P$ [' i' B7 j1 h" c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% B. @& D' x4 f9 o6 t' N<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, D& I7 M: F! g& w7 q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ n' ~4 Q/ A' v& W; H- B% C<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ m1 Q& ^% c# T+ D. M5 }- _<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ T1 h$ T) o1 V. n$ I<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( b( s* C: v& f: A( x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 M  p% ^. l* A6 \- R8 g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  C6 I1 F% {1 R/ `6 D/ {0 \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ p, x. E" j$ p) Y5 m7 b' k" z6 F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 d) f5 ^8 A. \. E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# r, [1 {" N3 j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

6 ]! T- l& n. D3 [6 Q, f7 |这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 {6 C( ?3 M2 c" G<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& m/ N$ E5 I4 f$ b<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>