【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
( o7 p; G0 \/ \5 d) H6 i. I4 L0 w9 f2 dThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; V9 H6 \! R  I4 K+ J* u" fFrom the first moment we met,
1 R, A  p9 D- U. S: y" C* ]) \( }I already loved you with all my heart
1 ]& L) y' O  k+ A3 K- f6 b4 lWe meet and talk everyday,
+ x# |6 f" [2 C! y8 Z0 e4 @But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& z5 v" @4 O- i" iI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' Z/ M0 l3 I# O" ?' ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: t; B# u$ D9 v6 J0 Q5 }& M1 oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. R0 g4 R) ]6 R9 I) NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ @% H2 r# Z$ X: ?5 M. k; W# PI want to confess that I love you,
8 f" I' Q" y* i" S8 Q. q  I! KBut I never did
6 M& y4 _( X  \) J: U* H8 ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( [- I* B3 j5 B/ @) u  kIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 I! C; r+ R. Y- ]( \% r& ]6 UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( `- w! l+ [4 L- [+ e( s/ pEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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3 R+ i$ ]; _) e- R1 H0 r! C[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

$ U/ ]+ W+ s7 t4 C2 x3 T$ c<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 t0 e$ N  J6 @2 t# \8 t<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ H* k* _9 t" q1 c<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 U5 G4 i3 q; Z9 g4 j) b+ p* g1 w<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 \; z  x9 @0 X0 o8 L) @<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 T# R' F2 M$ N<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 A0 G4 l$ ~+ L' T$ g* t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% n* @$ D' N8 ^3 X( I<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' N, \0 A4 m3 C0 ~+ H6 K' c1 h  U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, e; [2 ^6 Q& y) O" P. W2 ^8 d<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ D5 i( J' f4 S% W5 h<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ J2 S, t7 c: I<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 v5 x4 K8 \& D<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 u: q1 P( |: M, x4 |" l4 ]; a  Q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
& U# O$ [* `/ Y4 ^! c6 z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) F' D) v, F5 g. X9 z4 X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; q- u* R% [# p8 l, T<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 g- u$ q: a4 `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 u: S7 d; H4 L+ `5 j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 m' q' \; H4 X* g* B( B/ F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: ]; N. u2 B7 k5 }* f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ N5 K6 \$ j* q6 Y% t<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 C% @% f* e  @+ d<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( u$ X& s0 j( m+ g9 ]0 a- p<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
$ q! L2 |! h$ E% n( Q. M9 b<P>但我不会 </P>
6 _) I: n# P0 j<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  b/ y. @2 N& I% r9 r<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% [$ q  u& T8 y" A8 Q$ {. H<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 i& }- F3 |7 s% \  W0 J/ u6 b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ M* w* r# u0 a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" A6 L; q2 Q- b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- g; ?- X/ J8 B* }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; s# w! v! M' x/ ^) I; N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' k/ M# o1 u2 n! j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 f5 x) K6 Q" z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ Q% ^8 d* O" P. V5 r<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>