【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% n2 ^8 @  s  N" WThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 F0 V; k. N5 z1 `, z- mI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
! U, D, W9 d* A0 SBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ R7 f+ i4 q% Y2 n! K: C7 xIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  U8 H) I* O( H6 tI would probably know how you feel
  B3 {- F+ y6 |Love… just the word love
0 ~/ v+ }! V& u$ \5 H  HWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" V0 N6 P+ d- ~$ m: RIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* K( Z6 ?; ]- i4 uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: e0 ]& i. I/ oBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" y/ |+ h$ m9 p! V. b2 T5 aIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! ]2 R6 z. v8 X8 u5 O# y: oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 K6 b8 u3 O+ v. a( W6 ?) TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, m, L6 k! x) {9 k+ ~Can I entrust it to you?
! W/ g/ T4 g/ J  M. v. GEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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% d* p5 w/ a4 l. s" b6 C7 M) t<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  `5 @4 v" [5 j# n. `' G<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) N! b4 w3 _. t, D) q# @- n) q/ L% x<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, k$ }/ O2 q7 w4 z7 t<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 W; e2 X* ?1 x: ~2 @<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, a& \: R" e& q* x$ z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" a! h, [0 i2 B. R1 T<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, i; a, L. w. W% }/ o" {<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& R  l! d/ ~6 f<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& m2 E" v7 W/ Q% f2 _. o<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  H; W! _0 X7 y- f1 l<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% }4 I3 f) `$ b) y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- R$ A4 c/ K( J* F- C! p3 u9 b! j# D) n/ V<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 h& P  j" H& u+ L' n3 G& n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& X5 a0 e% r! \; E<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# B9 C4 P, D  I% I# y1 R7 `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% u# X( U, k; _$ X) r' ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ I* X6 F2 Q* I3 Q& t8 ~8 \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: ]' {: E- ^1 k% y2 {5 {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 F& J: e: S! O% A1 @: ~5 }  r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) v/ m0 n  ]9 v; `2 W5 w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! ?/ o* y8 E: I8 \<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! v. y$ @9 w: B2 s! X# _  }<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' H( l: g; _7 Q& H) p/ f' O<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ |7 @) J' {; R7 g8 A; o& M* \7 R<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 e; [' @& v  J  d  L<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ C" \$ z% D  n9 X. M3 q9 I! r  r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; U) B1 P9 e6 L, Q  l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% Q$ l' A% X) s5 a% O9 K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& |/ O* \. h' I) v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! E3 w) F2 Q; m4 ?5 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& B8 j3 K; F" x( `; y0 ^7 |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' b; _' e0 r2 B" J6 x/ {- l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 n( e4 C7 x. a/ }8 F; _这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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% W2 d7 ?2 {; i  W7 W# A! b# e这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' ~( T; H0 U3 s7 L3 w<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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