【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
6 U  v5 t* b  J' e$ {- I% _The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ A/ P$ N7 h: _5 k8 YFrom the first moment we met,
: S, K: i6 l& j$ J  G6 N* j9 ~& x) FI already loved you with all my heart
( l  T  C1 w- y+ b; Q! b4 sWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 L+ z2 ?# V# M) k1 V$ Q2 \If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  j" Z# g+ S3 V6 L( VI would probably know how you feel
; U; q& C& K! i! t6 S% kLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 G8 [: q& O4 S- lI want to confess that I love you,
: h8 |$ |+ g) C4 ^6 v  j0 T/ Z, U" iBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! v' f) R  P# m% _1 P7 ?If today isn’t too late,
2 ^) H5 y# |6 X6 m7 H' hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; x% `1 R  v+ rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ U2 q5 \8 {+ \Love… just the word love
9 v+ r+ @, u0 p" b  D, s- {Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 V" K+ G4 u& s; E; Z( _! xBut I never did
1 T0 {# M% i  YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& {' x/ s3 S  o: p( q" O- ~If today isn’t too late,
; q0 V6 `6 D7 `( gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) P2 m1 g$ {+ `) SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

. Q, f9 B% m8 c1 Y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

1 d7 Q  D! d" O2 w5 s<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 Z8 [, y" Y" A& E: b<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& K1 ~% \+ }' M; [- Z5 Y& I<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( ?1 O3 w1 O/ @; F; v, X<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ Y# S* K, x8 v' Z9 z8 ~) l* `/ S<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- k6 E( d( d) Y  o( E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  c% ~" H# G8 m3 H<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 k( z0 c1 i! H) E- I; }<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. t' }/ @! O9 c% \! L2 P<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  N$ X0 @& _& f3 V3 M. n. s<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% T* ?2 g+ s; I4 P7 k<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 N7 \9 \  b' _# q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% n* \% ^# Y  T6 o+ R9 @# x4 R<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
- q3 e" [7 t. ]6 N9 z" w<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 u2 X+ m5 P3 q2 @* K7 u1 N<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; A6 Q3 D( v9 A* d) a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ z. M+ c4 }4 @6 c$ o: T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* Q4 r- S8 Z0 O$ u) H# ~" D) P<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 P  s9 w8 _3 c# d5 z; ]% j<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" u& L! S8 c; _; _+ |) o<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 J( h- @- ]3 A2 j6 f7 G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 e8 A, ~0 n( }4 ?4 \<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( _8 _: b( b( S! Q. T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& a5 O! D" D0 T' ]2 A. b<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 C2 Y- t% u2 Z, N4 R, F+ N! M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( o9 G9 P% r( J8 W* S3 L" x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ t6 T( B- ?# ~3 @4 ]3 `, v( j% ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. q9 G! l  _, [) Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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" z8 N" c; b5 _. l, K, v( m- x9 X 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 q& x, k& N: L  i2 c<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 `  h5 Q( s5 \# l# ]8 O8 D1 t<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>