【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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* }6 ~; e" U) q我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! r5 ~; |3 P$ ~  s" S% n9 AThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 v7 f2 ^6 V* q' V3 X; v# TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 @& V; Y5 N2 H# l& Q' ^If today isn’t too late,
0 d9 |3 E: G! `2 x, a* O8 SI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" M6 k$ P7 l, I4 DCan I entrust it to you?
/ l5 e1 c1 I; |; H& mEntrust my love within your heart
( O' f" [6 Q4 S- ILove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 x7 p8 ~/ v8 A0 }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 x7 G, M. F# a4 O1 nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% ?8 P$ p: U" K! }) d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' L* D& T+ e4 w* y- O0 \1 q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 x+ X. p( v+ d/ N/ K6 v" F<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" c1 j9 \: y* w2 T0 @7 L<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 O, B$ S1 m/ _- b<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, {, ?2 n( L9 A  ~$ d& Y3 k<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ _, `+ ~% {8 O- d% a<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 E1 y" `3 D% E. O<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; R0 @0 C- ]5 |6 x<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! c- Y$ D* P4 ?' z! Y  G<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% A5 l- n9 k# r; U7 V: Q5 e* ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' E( P: o. ~( M% j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 s2 K0 G3 F1 P: ^- }0 l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 L. T. n, ~/ r, t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 N7 s0 P4 m. c6 {9 x1 c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 F; c8 V' f1 X. l/ y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 B# |0 ?" U9 R5 i7 r: A: G<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* n+ W# a5 u* G<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
% F' V* _. K" V6 I<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 {( m: L3 \& @) G: E3 z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 k8 ~) v% J+ L! h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" f& I0 \% U6 d+ |/ |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, u- U, y  e, `6 O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' }( \0 R8 M% n& g3 ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; B# W( \, d7 a( D# o. _1 N" m 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

) }, v* |, `0 I9 \) t" s7 y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>