【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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( ~0 @6 H, A% r0 G0 s" C$ P我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 d, Q4 _* F& HFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% H. r! [9 _6 [! yI would probably know how you feel
. z; B8 |2 I0 a, G& U  K4 I9 p/ }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 |5 w4 P  I7 @9 k5 B$ V5 Z, SI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
( {# P8 D$ F8 d, ~  b, {Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) l9 S# n1 x5 UBut I never did
- S$ h3 ?$ \7 ]/ L. l2 LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# W' y: v) w. H; u4 ]. p6 ]; CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 s1 s6 G& G$ t2 g5 a" A+ _Can I entrust it to you?
# m2 Y* j% P; F6 NEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. y" p- |; k  |& x& L& [1 d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* g4 g4 C. U. t! k' W6 A* _<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 M7 a* Q6 l7 d, j1 a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ Y/ t$ I2 u- E0 {' p( C4 e$ `<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  M( Q! o8 I3 R( ^3 U" b( m9 X8 R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) I5 g" ?2 W, b- g# R+ Q! J- [: }<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ ^5 H% d) _) H( Y- E<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 R5 d) X3 Q* g* }0 W; u<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
7 {+ x* o, ^# c/ H/ g<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 K1 c" A* W( a<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 \( y" P; V# S% k; U0 V/ D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- |% l/ B. S& e4 @( H8 q1 J: r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ G0 m/ \" X% T5 A' `1 A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 ]4 x, T% S$ k, b7 |7 ~2 f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* _; Z" w) W! o2 x" X, l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, G  p; ?! _9 R7 s<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ F& p5 K9 v7 s& e<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; b7 \2 J6 N" r/ Y9 A<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 i2 f) s. C+ X- W( P5 K" ~<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, }& H; {$ E% V: ^( Z<P>But I never did </P>
. h2 K3 l* Z; [6 A: j<P>但我不会 </P>
# T) y3 x8 k0 W4 w9 h1 T) U<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 E$ Z" Q3 m9 e3 S' I1 d<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# M9 F4 v, U6 h3 ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) K: d3 H, E6 t<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: I" W- e9 h: q$ n" e# V1 R8 ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- Q( z2 q4 M1 x; I  c  ~- d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% C& G7 P8 N$ r" v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ {4 N7 r3 S6 w, @$ I: F) t) B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 U7 z6 i" h2 H8 x8 z1 E" } 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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8 h1 d5 U* M5 |+ ]这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 E! z# t# H+ M: a<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 f. m8 e. l1 M* @  I" C  q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>