【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ ?, g$ x2 Q& A, iBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ K: j6 G8 I: f# [& ^I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
* w6 c$ V) ]: Q6 s6 q" ?# [, nWhy is it so difficult to express?
" |6 ^( L  _  G: y4 c$ pI want to confess that I love you,
6 t! ?; s8 T( k4 \6 P/ RBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. s1 [1 x) U0 ?5 _. K) v7 fIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 X8 W$ M1 D9 v6 G2 o# mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 P2 r8 \" ]# K& l4 W1 z* nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 W: l5 k3 R* n7 @) V$ M) M* GLove… just the word love
2 J6 {4 P( t+ ]  x/ o( n1 Y0 KWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 z: o1 \: T4 _" PI want to confess that I love you,
( h, Y2 p" h- s- qBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ G3 _4 T/ q* m: Y9 ~. ^) q' FIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ |% z) D; r: D( j1 x9 n3 R- L2 a1 y- QEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
7 S9 x& }( q! g3 O. SEntrust my love within your heart

6 `9 t9 L* O, d( k, X  @" D[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

$ W* I; v8 ?' n/ _0 J! N<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 ^* d9 E! R+ y: ^: J<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 j- H, l% {5 Y. o  e- g" u7 C! W( b<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- T  l) n. p/ ?<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 i0 ^2 s* p( W. ]; t% Q2 S; t0 z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ [7 Z7 s7 d1 Q* f: v3 }$ r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
+ s' G! y& J8 d0 M. f$ \! j<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ j6 P& R7 V4 }* ]: D& w; ~<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 c: g) Z8 }" @) q0 m+ _  X2 {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 s) O8 y6 k6 [7 W) `, v5 B<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 W( l8 Q+ p2 k: u! |9 C1 ^/ B<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ `: R) R; x/ S2 y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* L) X& }8 a9 ^<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* B3 [1 |( w' M% W. v<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; p# m* C; u; ]* h1 O0 \<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& S' `- M" G+ I7 c$ F/ `<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: v- s( ?; O, ?. v; r- h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 r6 [$ o3 }) ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" q2 @* C6 `, `! d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 `' \3 |. }$ C  P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( O* q+ I. e5 _1 M7 A  J9 z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' W, ^5 Z' |1 {. C/ V5 ?<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! q2 N" J6 `& a: e) m( l<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 D, q; \7 E% N) J6 q6 v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 S; \" C* T% t5 \<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( S$ m* z# n) g<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. b' w3 O$ u6 r* J: q  m3 F<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ D/ t" P9 K0 T1 X% n<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 \& @: Y# F/ W# @# a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* _' p7 m& m+ l9 U) w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 o8 l4 v- a6 P5 M2 D% @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 U4 H% G% K# u( y: R  G7 m& m<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 W3 S. m' m/ V6 \ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 [" @/ X: O/ Z! c  i8 M  Z0 k<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  c5 h: z' ]0 }, `<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>