【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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6 E) f8 G5 O) `: q* N我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 }* y( h0 q( b( _That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# N0 ]$ n  G7 U4 X4 \We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: T$ H4 @, o7 v; hI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, ~0 `0 Z1 `* vI want to confess that I love you,
. Z0 M3 w+ q; M: [+ U7 cBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 V3 K$ i/ K5 g! `# |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. Y& L+ @7 ]/ K4 O: [/ @Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 a9 X7 p  L. R9 S2 lI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ A' ?1 w! X; C' kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% T% i3 I% O9 F6 CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: M6 `$ S! F# o0 ?Can I entrust it to you?
6 x- r7 n, w9 \Entrust my love within your heart
" O1 O& V' K$ I9 sCan I entrust it to you?
+ H2 z3 w& q$ dEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( i# ^) V: a- }<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ Y& m7 L* E* {/ z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 i: I/ C9 K2 H5 a<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- g2 V! i# ^% {9 f4 y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, D! u% w9 o& V. r' _. W7 X<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 v& W/ D' U; q% G( v' I  k. H<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ ]" f% C" t8 z# R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. I2 Z* T3 z9 O; q7 M: v8 n% y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! \: W4 E- d% \9 V<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 ]9 r2 w: M0 ~<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 H( X3 Q& W) P<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ Q6 D0 L# w% U' j! j<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 m0 p. G/ U' I1 _0 e# G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; _" {, ]8 e) V  N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) V/ h$ J$ n4 i8 y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 P. b3 t6 x# e  e- w6 h2 c! \<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ U' r% e4 x: \; t( B. D<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ J1 ^$ Y! u5 ]% x6 a1 ~<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( o( s3 a1 {# Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. ?/ K- {  w- e7 W5 z3 h& B<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' l+ j6 K* j8 J) i" y<P>But I never did </P>
! z0 S% b7 P& a+ D- E/ D* _, f( Q<P>但我不会 </P>
+ u4 K2 Y0 N2 K! {2 t0 }<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" _7 o" c8 L& y$ k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ o' \: {$ `  u/ x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% w- E* ?3 Q$ P, U- M, G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, \$ j( k* ^( p7 e/ K1 e+ ]3 N  r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  Q( a) y3 U) w& W; g% ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ \6 L8 L2 Q- M# ~/ k: u<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 N) @6 {( x3 H( w( A( `! \8 W: j这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 c% h. x& ]6 h<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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