【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
+ u! j  N+ X, G3 ^% z* DThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' k/ J# ~4 V, |( FThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 ?5 o  Y& M8 j2 L( Z- }, ]0 rFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
" L1 L; D9 r) |0 S- p7 _, }We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; }; \3 c  s5 Q. c2 jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 w" W: M7 t3 o( l$ n* eI want to confess that I love you,
4 v/ _) T7 h: ^But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! J! J3 b! p/ M2 d: c0 j/ `$ LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 D" C" B" `+ Z! Z; ^1 T6 _Can I entrust it to you?
( U. M& k5 |/ y8 `Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; S9 s  S* @4 |: [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! F$ {/ i) Y4 R4 jIf today isn’t too late,
9 [: e2 h; Y- W! a- C* BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" _4 ], _' q- r/ t* HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
3 D& u6 R: W8 FEntrust my love within your heart

# b/ O- M" z& E" F2 V' F[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: b- D; C2 e5 K+ c0 F  w<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; m/ H/ J( ?( _9 Q5 g2 z! R* |<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 `3 @( r9 X! r<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 q' }; Q! r$ m! |$ G! z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% i# N% X6 _7 j/ J- G<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ s8 |( G, ~  Q! i8 x  `! p<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 l$ L$ w0 \6 w- n# F<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( k: A1 k% J4 {. y* [<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& X0 y8 o% Q* Y: P, o: D0 a<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  V! Q+ \4 h. H0 d6 |2 K<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ ]# H8 c% G8 }4 J; a, s<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 X. D5 ~* P/ d& ]) u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 X: \9 v# b4 R$ t: G; r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! x1 |/ n/ N5 l# I# J' y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  S! l- V7 |' e1 L* @0 s4 ?2 b, B& p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ B* \- ]* y; U& K4 U- Q# n) V<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: ?' }% i( ?' `/ H2 S2 P% _+ n4 f<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; g: o* y- F5 }<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% ^" R% y6 ?; D- `" p$ ~<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ p$ c  \# J! t8 K) B# W<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 y: _  M4 f4 s<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 o/ ?! r, c5 a* i+ y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' `0 i0 f0 k* S: l; X7 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 V! X8 ^: f9 f8 ^5 N<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( N" \; o3 @, d" ?8 C$ h<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ I" R1 _% S& f2 [3 l 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

+ ~' P+ v3 Y* V3 y这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% w& H" H: Y2 P: l+ X<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>