【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 b* g1 {. F" r" |9 F; ^+ GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* x( t7 C0 G. ]$ K+ OThe sky is happy down to its soul
. M9 o, W& C/ N% G2 @2 m/ \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 G3 I+ v  a* ^( R9 RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- \: B9 V: `( `+ g4 {Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ P/ |4 {! Y* E6 z* ?) G, MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 h1 _# S# Q0 ~: k1 ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( g5 m* f1 G$ L! r* m8 ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* Y4 }; g( k+ R6 p6 xI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" q  O3 i% M4 j9 h% V' BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# X4 @2 T$ U7 |. GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ E  e. {9 ?7 m: u% ^6 eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! s- c2 e; v- U. H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ f8 ]" ~  _( `9 D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  T/ N3 J4 {' N  |  R' V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! c5 M9 Y- _4 x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% M: c! L4 r+ z! i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 i) o* Q' b  I# I" L3 Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" D, n" a! q1 E7 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ @6 x! V- r( H" w2 o3 R8 c3 N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  B4 Y% K. ]* U6 L- x2 c# j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 o% R' M% l9 m9 Q1 o* D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' Z0 U# \8 d! i; C4 K7 y+ ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 v# i( O" M0 C1 ?" t9 J9 c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. B+ @) \$ e/ m& q1 p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' C/ K+ H, c* K8 `* m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 Q' o& N2 e1 ~  G) F! m3 z7 e- s: v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: C& V, i# ?/ |; _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: @( z" o5 d, M% F/ g: n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 f- G. i! k7 E9 Q; M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! @/ Q1 _9 P* Q0 g2 K( H$ t$ B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 H3 r) Q3 H- s+ ~# ~  S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) A9 e( z* m6 S5 e( T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ N( A" t6 j) _& z2 a- _- {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& q( e) ]6 x% b! x) L+ E, G% `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ H3 F  g) ~8 A; k% L! b2 O! [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# J" F5 T1 R: Q; y) t. R" Q: Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 r( D4 V& _9 n4 Y% }$ U. R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>