【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 `3 l% W$ ^  D9 {. q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 o  J, `% i, X  d* sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 V/ `! l" c% c  \0 c% ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! k& l" x$ l- r3 M$ C0 u: x4 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 D1 [6 a+ H' Z2 x( q4 ^Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 w) e+ S6 Q8 d) @I love you I love you with all my heart
$ }' f8 k# G2 {/ e5 I( O$ yNothing can compare to my love
# t, f  S/ U: g- r+ ]9 bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 [( K1 [; ~5 B. \) V: e5 M2 QI want so much to see inside your heart
/ E, E! n$ ?! @( N* g$ U3 @, vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 v% n1 E; @- ~- X1 d0 A' \1 dI regret not dying
  w# |$ u+ h! r" p& FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! o% p0 q% t! n: v% L) TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; w; i5 W) |' j. j; B  z/ D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ f" ?) Y& z! s  K* u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ S6 Q1 M" k0 n* B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 `- m( d  K7 X" y- E+ b5 L4 J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& U% u; R4 Z4 F) q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 c3 b2 m6 O* `( i) i" F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( E# g6 f  H, `6 q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 y1 X. N4 B: ^9 [/ u  v& B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( ~: u; f6 I6 l* Y. u' w0 S6 o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 U! M- g4 y0 E/ R# @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: c. ]# f* _2 W5 G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 P1 {- v1 F5 k. Y6 j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 y) b( X" _9 x- l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' ^, D9 y+ N# V5 N: p! `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: k8 u7 Q6 I* I' b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. f9 E9 s8 K+ @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* ]- C# d. R9 s  s( ]. N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) a7 K6 x" R8 K  J' z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 H* v* \  K* L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 H6 W) n$ d5 a4 v" A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: X; h0 o+ n' V9 v. G6 c& B6 l+ `' M! w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! _* i) t5 }$ E% t7 [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 j' G/ O; Z: \- Y# i4 a& u4 C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" o, O! ], E& z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>