【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ w/ L/ I+ `* |& i* ~$ v歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- b$ U3 D6 U* W  [& u& F' lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 q9 c. e6 `' i  w2 {2 xWith the moon kissing it every night
/ }/ n( j# {* W% S4 u8 h1 ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% W& y8 w& Q- I. U' {! ]2 {Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% `( F) X; C. b) {. kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 K( e+ J" l; g  FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ {4 `9 v* d/ PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) k3 @1 h1 g: }7 c8 {7 hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% s* b+ f. B. ~' n, y6 a3 R% yI’m still filled with fear
# f+ W- C( L$ A) VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 s- T0 y9 {. l7 t: cI regret not dying
) Z* E  \2 P1 X) L, I# ?, NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 ]! H4 N' z+ R# D" ~: F/ C* UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 i( c( x$ q* a5 }% d" oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ {% v5 n8 a8 \4 _0 d* |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ ?% p4 w& X" o! v+ {% ~$ M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  M  `8 E- o7 \! x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 ?6 T5 i, A% L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( T9 g% ^9 V5 ~- O- _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ R9 v# o  W! ^, {2 _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 n8 A; L. Y/ c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ _2 `- h# q: m5 j3 d& V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" `' h- J, o9 r) Q+ e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: W0 B+ ]% }2 T6 R5 X) H+ R% @/ h8 Z+ `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 O9 E7 p0 }; r: R: Y8 [( i+ j: S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 F2 y  m# t6 g% t6 t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* w/ i0 ]% c: J# _: A  t( F# C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 Z/ _" G0 L/ d1 O1 w5 B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; e' H4 I. e5 g. C) L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  t6 w! J$ A1 @0 m5 D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 b$ \2 ?- P' c' z0 ?5 f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( N  `9 n8 T' T' U& V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ A4 [) S: A' D, Y1 r! }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 K( S. R- x5 _( P) S) K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! \* s1 d  Q/ a5 n% x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 A! R9 `5 u9 F1 }1 [- Y9 K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 c* r1 o. q( X/ P( O! \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 F1 L+ ?. R; \/ ^# [! v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( H. J! r" A- ~8 h: Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; H/ I  ?& D. A6 A2 Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( @) L; O' Q. I3 Y9 I6 i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: H4 n/ L# \) M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 U( s# B8 I8 t) N6 t! }4 q9 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& I( m" u/ a# _8 u5 A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( t; E: S( j! b' m' `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>