【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( ^8 s$ G7 h9 O& R1 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 e9 x! \" o1 \1 IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ n: R; k) L# @+ ~1 z& @, LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 `3 {  I- e. Z  }/ fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. w4 g4 R& U( h" {I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 S3 h6 f$ D/ i; c$ G! @8 K+ L& e+ M' bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& u! N% T, j) sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 C9 z* Z, z$ o; ~$ x% X8 {) |$ ]With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% _  l* v: u; p9 p3 s" IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) k3 W* a+ _% _/ I3 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: K* j4 O$ B' @! k" N# _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 z7 B/ j* a* S# Y/ o; F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% U' y/ O" W9 W( ]- r. k/ Y2 s6 t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' i, C6 k$ G: z2 e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 h" _8 A& M4 G) J' C+ Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; n- o. _, k. F8 [2 _4 ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- D* U& `$ r4 ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- A) `& D, }  J0 c* P% ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' {" i  @% P( I8 T" {/ i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 o! m& G! R$ e, N1 {% w6 j<P>你无需担心</P>
8 i) W8 b2 _, `  u9 g7 q) b2 F$ F3 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* x% S2 X. u7 \" e/ ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: B/ R5 n7 J! y1 K! g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- G( W3 L2 R6 ?: W: Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' z( v& n+ W! n$ j) c6 y1 ?' m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 q5 O% F# b+ N$ h/ i% H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. A) l: Y6 V4 f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 {1 l4 q0 b0 _# L6 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* ?. z2 [  }7 l0 }+ L; q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 `2 [" {# ^2 @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: [1 a) x! ~& }) E5 k) b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  Y8 M2 @0 n9 n2 z: f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' l, C2 K  [  g1 ^% `/ h8 n9 h<P>I regret not dying</P>
, F5 t( b. A$ z: T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* L) P! K/ A, y7 l0 y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 I3 P2 O- R7 A. [$ F8 I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 a/ a' k5 a$ \5 f- _6 d: d' B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 ?8 |* n6 D# j7 u6 G! E" C) J1 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. f$ [: c1 w8 z' R8 X6 f  E0 H2 N9 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 \4 m4 O, A: `3 u+ y( _- k: z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 m" ^' |, N# Z: {# V7 y9 ^9 Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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. ~3 P) H: ?8 L2 K4 F. f3 U2 y" ^) q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 G; O3 r! r. t  E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>