【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 y0 ]9 {# P9 ]& e1 W  W& L  jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 |9 X9 \+ ?0 P5 x6 F+ JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 d6 V8 x( z. d! _  L! ]2 QThe sky is happy down to its soul
& {1 E4 w( `) c- q  w5 g9 HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 U9 r" ]& a- J- e: c6 AYou needn’t fear anything
9 F, X% X0 t$ E$ R! t7 DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- j  W" ?( R! JI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 T1 `7 C! A5 d" J& e2 c1 V* H* x7 GNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; y6 S( @$ s- Y; l6 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 A* |; b" K; i; A) G  GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 p  b9 `  D3 MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: ?! p/ s9 h  ^I regret not dying
" M) m0 }% F/ KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' O, j3 _- ?" p* qWith such a tongue as yours,
1 S8 h7 B2 s* f1 a1 t% \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ |! N& M8 c& F* n) X, |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ y0 J" l1 ?5 K( ], n+ p5 q$ T! f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 B1 H+ e& {1 F$ t/ {3 B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  ^0 {2 L  f$ z  A4 q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 ^1 u+ ^" ]5 s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ d8 S# d; M) r/ O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 n' G9 _/ h7 I% q- x2 }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; ~; I3 M1 T% R5 a4 h: F7 l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 z6 J, @9 h( v% M/ E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 s9 k8 X0 Y6 H/ e! Y  A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% Z7 F2 u  G1 X& J  u+ `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 X9 _+ g; I( W. g6 O& c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! @" `1 h5 K, ~! \& H6 ~$ ^9 P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- P$ g6 k0 }3 j  o7 A5 \6 E0 X% q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 P% d. e* Y' T2 F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) w7 D6 X& V& X& ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 h' U* m& [1 e/ v% r) l4 D* j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ [4 e  K- e! ?" `6 O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% z" L( I- i- N<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& Y  j3 M# u- Y7 o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 K# A: z4 W/ t1 P) p( k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ O+ ]1 D, l) E9 ~2 m: }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 J/ @6 U: B: K  U$ s0 i我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! M3 J9 |# W6 [8 J3 K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>