【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 T, F, b. B& c( m' ?" y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 X* u; r/ t& {% aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% Y0 Y# ~$ Q+ U0 lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ \( d& Z, C2 a0 JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' }5 T/ U7 @& \* ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" o; ^& W$ Z0 d) q: d% _* H. @+ i- xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' r' I  Y0 C$ o7 s- CI love you I love you with all my heart
; ]6 M$ Q; [3 jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* L7 s+ g/ G- N% UI want so much to see inside your heart
* o. V  S/ D4 H# P& H- `. lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ R! Y5 d* {4 d! t2 s/ l- Y/ K# yI regret not dying
' M  x' O6 O) U0 ~8 QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. P) ]( [5 V2 c; h2 XWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 K, z9 u" l2 j, E1 R4 dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# L% O3 d$ T- }( m. F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ S  G, Z/ |4 U( z, N  U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! ~0 a' w" o# R# b) r( {$ l; Y- o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 X4 O: ?" n, g6 `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' R# `9 H, @( }* n, }0 k  j4 W1 i& |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 b5 i3 l" P" `+ b& L8 o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- y$ F. n9 a# c$ J6 Y& T% R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ Y: z9 ^1 S, Q$ p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ H+ G. G0 p; w, u8 [4 T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( U) q' J) Z, r3 Y5 C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 P4 h" i: B* t7 m$ n' X" x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, k% P7 s: ^* b1 K! G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 j  M3 m2 {) E, U. |$ w+ j; e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, e" ?: p$ {# d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ D6 ]# s8 a, e8 [* _6 a$ {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 b4 [4 y5 c9 r/ Q- l; L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* [0 `2 F! _. B/ T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 _. J3 F/ @1 e5 |# M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 ]8 S9 R0 G+ W! Z) ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 a5 z; P) q1 J2 ?  L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& z& u/ z  r  |1 j2 [0 H: M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 d$ K% R* V4 S* h( i* c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 s; M# i" t+ O7 E* l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 j% G2 V0 Q9 s0 }" r6 `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 [7 W& B' U; U. ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ g  g8 ~5 j# `6 b0 F' z0 d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& F4 c" Z# j3 O! K* E. `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ y# h, L( {3 D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! N; R8 H* F8 w3 n/ A( p( r: m我请你剖开它
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7 z) j0 ^; h( d- ~" r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ [" k0 Q2 B7 N. a+ t1 k+ {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>