【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ q0 m. c3 W( d* |% [% UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ O+ y5 M7 C3 l" s' _: O& z7 cThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 ?  @; u6 U* M6 O  PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% T7 C- ~, d$ ?! z' r, Q8 hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 ]: A* Q1 [' O2 X1 K, yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ z5 t1 H7 f  }3 V+ L! w" mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 S) R7 V& C: R! R$ II’m still filled with fear
+ y& t' f3 D$ R8 m* b  HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ ~6 J& c. i) c- {* tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 V( q+ m+ Y8 x' T& [* d; `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 Q+ T7 |# [0 oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% B, q5 O/ l( y/ Y/ t; T- b' o6 z, |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 G% p: J/ _+ a6 J* ^( x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 Q; J* b0 N6 ]) ~/ Q$ r* B4 P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 L6 y, \2 S' u; x) ^& q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; Y0 d7 m/ i# X9 B2 q9 b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! Y! R8 x5 a% T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ L6 x% b9 F; w! U5 b' H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' q* {! N: {( ~8 o  Y  Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" D% Q0 t! B3 z( b- Y7 t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 g6 ]1 C" l, I9 J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 x& Y& u$ L; {& [* l9 w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ a" S. M# l9 |# ?; m5 n% k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 T6 i5 J$ G8 _( j: d- o: r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 @" p; Y% o- C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' q% Z" V' H( q5 `* _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 Z! S) ^/ ~, c- B+ F# w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; j* j% |' V5 K8 u6 N; b. x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 [- _7 y2 b. a9 {$ b4 |9 t  ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! y$ B( k: g9 y6 P4 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 D& L! Z7 M! g& p( T* h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 A7 p9 ^+ Y0 D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 i3 y( N) z/ I+ ]# o4 L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) N* m2 {! O: f8 W" g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ P# y2 t3 S" k% P9 n1 v% G$ Y! |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 ~3 c/ I' H: e* O6 J( d, E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ m/ T9 b" L. Q( c$ V; C+ P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# Q! }9 C) d$ l/ n* T5 K" ~( e: m* l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) C- }6 [) H7 Q7 f% W7 N- i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' b- d' v+ i/ f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 U! Y, f4 Y& m' r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 V- S+ m& F4 \# ^/ Q2 |" X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ O+ |0 k8 h% \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>