【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, M1 N* V- M6 h0 K+ w, ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
- P* ]" a: I8 N7 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# _' g, {. {: ]6 Q- |/ L3 tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# v! o9 A0 ?3 k& p2 R* F# Q2 R/ r8 _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' }7 P% r# l) S9 qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* A2 B  X! F5 L% o+ hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; ~% Y7 R# M2 {1 e5 a/ q4 J4 f3 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( u% P8 a" v: ^/ vI want so much to see inside your heart
1 W; r4 m$ E% C# wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 `4 U# t7 g9 c# @: l8 c- F5 k& SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' G* Q$ c2 b0 |$ }6 ?: bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 ]3 c# g; `7 T9 P& r8 O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  @$ T3 r/ n0 A" h/ ^$ O, v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* n" a3 O/ S" X2 {- y) y( i$ c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, c+ B; v. P* |' Y/ n8 ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  f6 J' _, a! U6 t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 o& O3 E9 \1 p: H% j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 b8 t2 N6 Q" V( i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, p3 p7 H' ~6 R& b, \; I' W" P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 I; T* N7 g. s9 C! Q/ h+ o) B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- P# X* z7 K% m2 |' |$ j* r5 i% n8 {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 `3 f3 W3 }4 R8 F1 F<P>你无需担心</P>
' A: o) o" J9 N' U6 {# h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 o! ^4 o9 H" c0 c& a6 x6 g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 l' l3 U4 R) e( e' i# E7 w  j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( p- y8 {2 s2 {9 k2 B: c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) M4 P  V* _( P3 y$ a8 [9 Y: l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, T# p0 F( h, p% p( R5 f  |+ h' }& k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 K7 i2 J. \# d& K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, N$ D( k, y) P6 p+ O0 X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 A: C* }8 z2 t& f$ H; I6 P( v! f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: ^- W- w% U- D) c2 s$ k* z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 m9 ^; d+ S7 J; ]% ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 n( K9 T2 ], [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 R4 i# T8 @1 d$ |# g- H2 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! P7 J8 z- a4 \* `# o; F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* c4 J; R6 }6 x. v4 U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& V7 S7 X  q+ a- |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- E& w2 k, w6 v  w+ N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! `) `! x% d& Q4 [+ P" P8 P. M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) O7 E% F6 j  g4 b: R: ^/ Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 e. ?' K. p+ {; J  x( K/ q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% ~9 `7 O- {3 R1 K) u0 ~) W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& Y1 c4 v, ]4 M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- z3 d3 O+ F: ?$ V1 ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" j3 Z' x% P4 f* z2 z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 i7 e8 o- l/ x+ G2 D& T; N; |2 P/ ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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& z# R! T: Y, q+ P9 g) F" N8 Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>