【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ P5 ]2 O2 V5 y7 H) yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 e: M/ m( \8 E* ~' sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: N. G& {0 V( _6 U- x& ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( @% P& h) L9 i6 V0 X; L3 _. lSeeing the sky content with its love
0 P7 p0 k/ S/ }6 H3 f: Z$ dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: C$ ~/ z0 W( AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; }  Z# L$ e( ]6 ]! d+ K* [I’m still filled with fear
4 g. L+ x% H7 @( j* Q4 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 N( P4 U: U* j& CI regret not dying
: t+ x! k' s! g/ QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 j* J% r& S! p& @. RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 a6 ?, d% l8 J/ r9 a1 PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 ^- i6 h2 [* K* e  P) _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% ^9 Y6 ^' ]# U! U: x7 m& y3 H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! |( }- [1 q$ A0 p8 ^2 X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! F, S! h( \, U( A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 `2 m* D$ _  s  P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 d; t& E. i/ C; S; B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 W, ^' ^- {( `2 b! q. S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  r4 f+ f  b" n. L' `4 t3 ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( O3 I% d' I5 \, K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' H9 Z2 H  m7 A1 c! V, y7 v( s( A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 S' R% e8 g/ ]7 N1 t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 `) r3 d- s. v& _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- W" J* I/ n1 k1 e. `; i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ Q$ R) q0 ^$ L/ w4 G1 _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" `2 s7 T3 Y4 s# v: F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" B: P$ J) v! ?+ p7 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 @) p3 f6 S* b' F' G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! p2 Q" Q; Y$ `: l8 x7 s# D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# ^, f" b: {! [2 m5 M/ d9 s  @& `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 x4 F" z/ {' B$ G) F- X# t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 ^# o0 ~- f" [% }. ^" w) o" z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! q6 P( T4 l5 r' a3 X! j6 m+ l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' j' N- u. i, I* W: {' ^% Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 u$ b+ D+ q; h2 W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( O* n( M3 z! A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& ?9 v5 E* V" A' d! s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 N/ H5 _+ f9 ^1 c: c/ d2 a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  ^* k; s" A  U" V: [! H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

1 C6 `$ Q! s8 l% J4 j  A- [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>