【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 a9 H8 F! C( R' j2 D' ]5 V6 w歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 t) t- A1 l, _0 B  Q. U8 \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' D# [$ z( h& L' Z' i& f) bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 P9 l0 j: n* G2 F* b. cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- P  J3 ^2 A7 B1 }1 ?; J, eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ r5 a6 Z% r4 z' x" o, WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 k' t+ t) l' P3 h/ K+ DI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' ]8 l' r9 d' PI regret not dying
! \' T1 M( T( f+ z' E. G/ X7 Z( r2 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ {# w+ k+ ~* t" i' {8 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% A$ w2 t' v9 J* jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 ^5 H4 k( G% U' ]% ?% U! {# P, ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* Y' L- K3 D6 p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. U" P7 e) ^- V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. y5 Q0 ]7 Y% r/ X; Q' {& Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- ^* Y$ A5 M; \# m+ t) c  U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 ?: K3 N! Y: [# x! @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: q$ }, C" z$ s8 A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: K  z# H9 X# L" ?2 l9 ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 u4 S- {4 Q$ Y0 K& f1 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 d* D! ~" x; Z9 a, ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. R" S3 K; I7 C4 U3 e0 |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* t; B- I2 n6 c6 A' a+ ^7 l<P>你无需担心</P>
! w- _+ [3 Z5 G+ Y! V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 }# \5 j3 Q" F: \) m' e. o+ ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  a, t/ b( j( N/ e3 {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 m1 k( [. f8 a: D2 A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 w& K8 |( F; H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 f5 g* \7 A' F& d- U, s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% H) D* O# ^# q* |4 ]3 j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 p1 `) d7 o; ~8 @# x/ P: z3 ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ w7 F0 S" ]4 S) c" C8 V% z, O6 M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ A4 j; p/ l" F' p2 l: `: V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ L/ q7 [% P$ R' T3 H; ]0 X" B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 Q# B5 P, W; H( q# ~3 @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 P9 Q9 V9 @9 U( |+ f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: b  F: `2 p" h7 o: n/ Q3 m2 h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- n; l, Y' ]3 @9 C( z; ~" T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. e( e7 F  R( g/ t5 |: ~7 U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: j' m. Q$ v) [) S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  p9 W! i: g2 \3 z9 ^4 g* E- j% X, R我请你剖开它
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& c4 z7 W: M2 W5 l  \4 f. m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>