【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
" y& W7 m0 p  V) S8 x" B  y+ O: d3 G) MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( Y0 ~. W2 l$ P& U7 n4 J2 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 a0 U" t- U- Z1 }9 f) LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. A6 B' W4 v5 p$ U: w; I) [2 QThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: [" l# D# p4 n- V% NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ R" a# k% z0 p3 OYou needn’t fear anything
- Q0 j  c+ @# g$ C$ k. HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& e  b) F7 M; P0 f% D- uEvery other word you utter is love
: ]1 |+ j# j! x$ ~; m% SI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% }  N2 J% U  n7 F8 h4 iNothing can compare to my love
& B+ L1 B6 S4 s, s& ~( u; q; I- V* @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% D- S5 g2 p5 ^- n7 O9 J+ DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 H! H( r+ |( D; s4 e: MWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 c$ V) F' f6 G& ^4 r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 m% D* Y2 s. [0 k3 ]7 D  Q3 O& Q( ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% ?% j1 C: H. I, Z# ^3 P: }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 S2 }. @/ O: {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( K( F6 p) o% I7 w  x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; o8 a* h8 Z6 l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 n5 e. x7 a. z/ j$ q1 {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. z; m9 ?" V3 T# z( d. y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; l) H# n2 H1 O9 Q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 t$ r+ z3 g) S6 V7 O8 ?2 u) [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: M3 o/ z* h; n+ [$ j$ u$ j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 r5 ?1 h7 ^" k) Y+ _5 Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' W. c9 _& D! C5 D! A- D3 s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 s' a. ?0 s! \1 I/ o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 u1 E' B! @# T& l- t0 |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, a$ H* s. b. Y$ c' \' A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# N  H/ ^9 k: P: G: L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  b  _; |2 z, L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 ~$ |) o. i* a3 y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# q1 x8 O. ?) U: \8 H1 n9 h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 O" D4 \) x5 ]# m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: J8 A  w7 L7 K8 ^, Y/ Z) }2 h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 x, B' X4 U; N. k' P+ R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ e' ^" g" w; S9 C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 @$ s# P+ ]" ?2 B- d4 o  v0 c) x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 O, Z% I& E. Q3 h3 ~3 B1 G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# Z9 n  `' P2 c3 [& G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 T4 L" K' H! |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 w/ t' v, G3 F4 E8 D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: e* v: o7 l' G, b: `" e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 m) q* u6 B( f* r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 S: X7 Y. \0 |6 J$ n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>