【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) l. h4 ?. q/ _$ g/ D$ nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 C. J5 k3 H) A/ u* kWith the moon kissing it every night
9 t- j+ K/ O1 vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" x6 t1 D" s( e0 JYou needn’t fear anything
- s: R8 E9 L7 H0 p/ FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' G. N, U5 x) }I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) B0 D% A* x; o- p8 ~0 kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# [' S2 ?) x# l; XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 t( ]( {- m0 p$ g1 Q; rI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, h- t8 x  s0 w/ yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& G- r+ x" J" p, [) \- O+ L) ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  i8 d) Q8 y* j. c$ U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: [( F+ E$ N4 t0 P9 o3 d- J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) `% G! ?2 ]: F2 @& c. ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- _/ p0 y! W2 i- x# D6 y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. R5 y# s- f5 X* O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ k/ U$ k+ W* @, P$ o& P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ M4 u2 I: V6 i$ L! l3 m/ ~3 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) K# Z" [  @9 r+ O1 O4 c& l0 W, L6 O& o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 \, [9 E+ ~5 p/ m% R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 q) N& Z3 D. F" D# {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, `# L* |: I: d' n' p+ I  G& h6 f/ a. c<P>你无需担心</P>
8 I! P6 q2 o: @" o+ j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 L8 [& T0 u* C& i) d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. H$ O" S6 ]$ b0 Q- Z& Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' {7 k/ A+ P( h" c( q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( {. G9 I  k% Y) B& L1 q* v9 c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 A  A/ f" U1 B0 T5 O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 m1 E- \; y+ ~! ~6 G' ]- t- l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 I- z8 y8 J' R7 M# f2 L6 P  g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 {" R/ O% `- F/ R  |$ Y( K  H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) r! J* h/ ^3 l9 `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" h$ L9 H! T/ s  I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  `4 _8 ~2 }; g3 e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! z* k5 J  [, p8 D( _" d) C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ p- J" O) x( Z( _1 [& z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 s& t6 x: P' [4 r- E! Z- l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 [% u: I! n) ]  r6 B2 u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' V" ^: x% s# s# y. ?4 b' }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>