【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. _$ W7 g: F6 a* a歌词我附在后面。
3 i# ]0 R5 y  [7 aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; V' b, |9 G1 M" X9 \0 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" t. C+ @. v% b9 NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, ]( z' u' m, V; O; [+ M$ iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 ^: }4 V3 N1 t- {  D# bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 r7 M5 Q( w; k) k7 H8 `: k7 CSeeing the sky content with its love
. d0 Z9 J, C& h# g- c$ B) tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 V" ^4 x" Q  ?, L/ l' `+ L' ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! I* n; E  _# @I love you I love you with all my heart
0 ?8 H3 c5 {( m. A8 |Nothing can compare to my love
8 k" V2 P/ D; A8 P& cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# a! Y; l5 g$ B% `% YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 C5 k( F* }5 S3 NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ A) p5 x7 Y: K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 C! d% l8 I: ]& G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 b; E" _0 ~' q( N: t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# ?4 n1 y3 _9 S/ u3 r( S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 Z* q! [! x# g8 J( }2 M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 Z- l  S( D5 V4 k$ Z  s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. b. \: M; a, l, p. q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 A5 d: p8 u* ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' G1 u5 G4 }7 c4 T/ D6 q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* t2 ?9 j& F# y6 q3 I, ]! t4 h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 Y# g3 @) a8 {7 C4 Q; Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* x2 A' S, h) }1 Q* z! U8 ^/ Z6 d- h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ J( P+ x9 M2 N: w6 T5 z8 S6 L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 h; ^# M( i, C& r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' P( n) O6 d8 I( g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  V/ V( Q, ]# l9 }4 d5 |1 e# H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 v/ j. @: l- O. A, d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) `( a0 Q0 h& K6 _( O  Q# X! @! P* V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; V# d' z; T" w0 b( C* j+ A2 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 m) L. T7 h' s6 W) a$ ?5 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" v1 [5 t. i8 E9 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: s* j/ o- }+ X  u% ^1 r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 E( z3 O' ~( h9 O* u5 b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" S1 Q+ S" D$ i( `3 d- H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: I, B' d2 S7 |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- A5 Y: ^3 {( G; u$ [! t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% E1 v: n& _8 w. x7 x; V  u' |$ D<P>I regret not dying</P>
  v! w9 P4 D: M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: e- L1 K8 D' X5 @4 E+ e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 b, E' h$ w) l- \! e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 M. B3 D5 G8 T5 a/ Q  ^/ T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ n2 [# p4 d; C) K+ x1 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! Q% F2 V1 f7 f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

5 o9 v2 {) W/ t8 w+ [$ o' {/ i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' |. ^7 J- Q& U; \# y  o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>