【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 d6 i- G4 L4 s& I5 rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- _; K# W0 h) l, X8 `9 j/ y! IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% `9 L# P  N8 C6 K' T; P- E& N; Z$ Q  _8 PSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# h, h9 _! S) x8 y& x8 K" B: yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, r$ Q* v4 Q" B6 \' W) SEvery other word you utter is love
9 {9 V+ v- y1 Q( E* g$ X+ nI really want to know just how much you love me
1 [) B; l# m% I2 JI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ S( x- W& G+ \/ ?5 N- V+ {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  i- o  g- \% D$ i, O( _+ ~2 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 \/ a; K7 Z' M4 lI want so much to see inside your heart
' l6 k1 s; L/ e% \0 NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ b# I- R2 [* o. A; _! W  oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& o: E6 f' `6 R. x+ SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ [# Z7 g/ o" A  c5 `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) ]2 {1 l7 n( W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% o' C3 v/ E3 K' @- y9 k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ C2 F. F, ^, k: l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ O- k3 Z; z- ]0 t* N! i$ U% F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 L# J, w# h" }/ N+ i. Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 I% Y* V! J) Z  z. N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. e0 D3 Z& o- D8 s7 m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ U8 u; M& w2 a6 U1 Y! \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" W$ @$ F+ ^1 v- _0 _/ V2 I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 z( E+ `1 e# g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 ~/ `, ^1 t! C* U6 g- M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* R: J9 p& R- b9 b7 ?& J+ |0 C+ `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! T( S7 U% j! x) R0 E. k7 c4 n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- _' M. f; y" Y2 }/ S6 r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( j) j- x+ \5 z4 G3 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 _; Z& I0 d  \8 m1 w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- G: E/ `+ u: {' L* U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" i+ Z5 y1 B( R. {2 g$ \4 l% d! g1 Y; U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" k; Z! c: R# u: ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  Y3 s0 u% @2 q$ t, S7 m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ q: b% H* F  v- H" k) e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 O; e, z% y. |; T; ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 c3 e- H6 y: O" [<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 _% B: u. T0 y  G- o" r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 N0 R6 K- d6 r) u! S- Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& z0 b; g" M$ {! |* x9 ?" `7 Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ T; ?4 c3 |% ?$ ?6 z' p2 [7 z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# ?  c+ W, _1 T. ^, t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) v7 n! z4 |" Z9 R, a. C7 a2 V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

0 D. A8 t7 i1 J, f9 x6 J* q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 a, b* @$ x7 O# i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>