【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% m: H: G. a1 C" VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 v  V5 K7 _0 b* p+ B0 ^8 X. QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" G1 g: k& x" w7 ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- H3 U, v) T9 k9 \/ Q& {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' d! Q# Y8 W. l# c: eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ p* R+ c- @9 ^! }' M- pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 B  c5 Y9 A" b5 yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: O: a/ @; i& y3 B. Q! x" cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 H+ ~; ]7 z" y2 z1 TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' q. `& D6 R8 C3 H/ i, wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! `" v/ u7 m9 Z3 F. |$ T7 O: xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 f) [) u; N' q+ R, Y. OI’m still filled with fear
% Q4 L; m+ C% w0 T& F$ U0 P7 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 L4 O' P) ]/ [( I5 f% lI regret not dying
& P" v" r. `) b# ~' d% R. vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: A+ P1 H5 w; m1 |9 B/ d3 V( kWith such a tongue as yours,
7 ^  |/ c& O8 S& WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 r  N# B3 F. F; M& ]! g0 ^- v+ {& P0 CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 S$ O4 X% r4 \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# s! o' \. D: |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" i9 Q1 m6 G# U5 x# r, H8 O) e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 n7 C) r6 |7 E) A" U( U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. o$ w5 x$ p# f0 m4 v. B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. ?3 A# `; G& q) A& H# }0 k- ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 @, e+ i0 v# d9 p  @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. X; |$ `: [! n, L' W! V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. O) H, \; ~, `0 P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- x/ M, w: z" u! X( ?% k3 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; ?  @+ E. V+ d' I3 _3 m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ l" g' L5 F7 \( v$ n, {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 P9 e1 u: B$ \1 \# o) A+ O3 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 F7 p3 _! w+ }% F/ k3 O2 u8 ~; k  n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* M6 ^! W; u% {  o  {4 W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& K& j! D0 Z1 c* {  y0 O" I" ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( D, E- r3 O" g3 ]7 b$ B: }" @: A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" W7 I5 i# a& ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" K/ p) ~2 }# b' w" H+ x: m/ Z  f# W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 e* d+ A, Z4 J% x" m' ?4 F1 w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 _. l0 O9 F, A9 i; Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. s( s' I6 \) d* V' Q) y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ X$ x6 ?  D* V<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& ], c% p: _8 n1 t; o- ~& Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ y0 s0 X: y, [6 h0 x! y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& m7 Q4 A% g4 d8 l, U2 v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' p# P" {7 |) I3 D% T' C: h7 I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ M* l# H5 {+ N" a  J* r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& a% q, D0 H) \/ H) y# u' [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 y3 y, D4 c' d" {3 e1 h5 K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 ]+ }- m4 Y% s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ M9 e& k' U5 d7 @; a* R5 g我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>