【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! e* r. p, D* ~* w- @7 ~6 h" PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 i' q+ W. L! O; xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' {' k: V2 y; q" `, |* sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, I8 P5 W( D" d& }" {( w' uSeeing the sky content with its love
, C" |3 U, k8 QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; b( J2 G; N8 t: p+ g  TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ J- S# o/ Q) G' @# m  EI really want to know just how much you love me
. g: k( j! w4 [# i5 S! U) YI love you I love you with all my heart
* G2 P+ c: z  t; ~0 wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: j$ p% r" [' Q4 @" v! r8 eI’m still filled with fear
" z7 Q- }7 Z/ c+ u& y- IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( S& y! [# }5 }4 O* qI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" W, w8 W+ m. @With such a tongue as yours,
+ `7 F3 W6 }- dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. C% |0 }  i& h+ V* a; F; r1 p* B' J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ K  M" ?- n3 R, L; m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( f3 i( n' l/ X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. ?; Z. a* G2 c. x* V# Z% Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 C; I! L. y6 Y0 S) q. n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ G- @$ W1 a0 V; Q! K- s8 `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  }" Q5 p! V- a+ i) L5 c1 P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, {! m2 Y) O/ `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% p0 W' h# ~9 B2 i7 x- T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( `- M: D6 I7 }6 P' W( R9 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 `; o4 C( U2 w. t2 Q( v; `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, }4 Z; R0 V  @5 I( v0 j/ w7 M' @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ o. X6 h3 b: y! s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" w( _$ S9 u- v1 x. w* J0 I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 d* Y( }) U4 p/ ^& o9 @: A+ H2 {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( M7 B$ d. k  q1 _7 }. u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" B, x+ k/ L5 f( x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ a3 u/ V; S5 U: C  l% }; U0 d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 u  u7 `: [' N# _" ~4 L6 m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 p3 d4 @! u& A) V: `; a( r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 A! w6 U& g4 y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  C& S; Y8 _/ r- e6 g) ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ ]' f( J/ _- h7 f7 T0 _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' S9 y+ e0 p2 p/ j+ B, W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! I* d% A! ^8 {6 u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; X1 _$ h( L" X/ N% T8 q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>